Star Wars Challenge: Week 23
Something you wished was different in the series...
Well, that's interesting. Honestly, I never considered changing a thing, as everything needs to happen just as it does so the story moves where it's suppose to go!
'Cept the dialog of Padme and Anakin in the arena; now, that's just corny and contrived...you know the dialog I'm talking about, I'm sure. It really starts when they are having dinner at the Lake House and Anakin is telling the beautiful Senator about 'agressive negotiations'. Later, in the Genosian arena when their lives are definitely in danger, Padme tries to lighten the moment with a snarky comment calling their dire situation 'agressive negotiations'. For me, it falls rather flat. Perhaps it's the delivery.
I'd definitely change that.
'Cept the dialog of Padme and Anakin in the arena; now, that's just corny and contrived...you know the dialog I'm talking about, I'm sure. It really starts when they are having dinner at the Lake House and Anakin is telling the beautiful Senator about 'agressive negotiations'. Later, in the Genosian arena when their lives are definitely in danger, Padme tries to lighten the moment with a snarky comment calling their dire situation 'agressive negotiations'. For me, it falls rather flat. Perhaps it's the delivery.
I'd definitely change that.
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